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 Eternal Hymn (Automatic Writing - Poem)

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PostSubject: Eternal Hymn (Automatic Writing - Poem)   Thu May 07, 2009 7:24 am

(Because poems don't always have to rhyme. )

I wrote this via Automatic Writing back in June '06. For those of you who don't know what automatic writing is: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Automatic_writing ) I entered an almost trance-like state and after I woke up, I sat back and read what I had written only to freak myself out. (I'm sure you are not all aware of my strange ''visions'', so read this to gain a bit of insight as to why it was so freaky: http://axelalloy.deviantart.com/journal/5900851/ - Beware, the article is old. I might have to re-write it to update it. ^^; )

Anyway... ANOTHER poem I entered into a contest. (Hooray for yet ANOTHER cash prize and trophy and crap...)

This is what I wrote:


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Eternal Hymn


"You reside within a distant land.
Far away, your spirit rests.

My heart knows of your existance,
as you call to me without a word.

It pains me to be so far from you.
Your face not staring at me with an expression of love.

May my mind become all knowing so that I may find you.
Let my days be filled with thoughts of the happy songs we will sing.

Yes, when we are together, we will sing joyfully.
Even the earth itself will resonate with a melodius hum upon our meeting.

Until that time comes, be patient as I am having to be.
Only in our dreams are we allowed to see each other.
Yet I am satisfied.
I am happy.

Hold on my love for that day.
The day that echoes like mirrors on mirrors in my dreams.
Hold on till I speak my words to you.
Till they wake you from your slumber."
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