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 WR2K4 - 'I Hope'

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PostSubject: WR2K4 - 'I Hope'   Sat Nov 21, 2009 8:31 am

I Hope

The wind whistled through the trees as Dick stood with his back against
his car. The sky was grey and yet oddly bright, almost as if the sun
was desperately trying to peer through the clouds. It was October and
the trees were almost bare, leaving the haunting skeletons behind with
simple flecks of colour here and there from the leaves that were just
clinging on.

"So cold..."

Dick shivered, his breath
clearly visible with every word, as if his voice was a physical
presence. The atmosphere was so thin, his words echoed through the
valley below.

"I can't believe I actually agreed to a date." He
smiled slightly, the brim of his hat just high enough to show it. "It's
not like me is it? Who'd have thought ol' Dick Dastardly would ever go
on a date." It did puzzle him how he got into such a situation. He
normally couldn't care less about anyone, let alone women. He had never
really had a romantic attachment before and everything seemed so new
and exciting. New, exciting... And scary.

What had this woman
done to him. Had this purple haired siren charmed his soul leading him
on a path to destruction? He couldn't even cheat anymore without an
attack of conscience. He was ruined, he was a shadow of his former self
and yet, oddly, he didn't care one bit. All he cared about was her.

shiver ran up his spine as silence fell. Only the faint echo of the
valley below and the rustling of the leaves on the ground could be
heard and yet it was almost deafening. Nerves, it seemed, could even
get the better of the famous Dick Dastardly.

"Do you think I
chose the right spot for our date? I'm sure I have." He turned to
Muttley, his loyal companion, with whom he had been talking blindly to
for the past few minutes. "I don't think she's the sort of person to
complain anyway. And I think I heard her say she likes views like
this." He turned back round to the view before him, staring at every
inch of it as if to settle his nagging mind.

A beautiful valley.
Tall, bare trees with faint smudges of colour from the ones that had
not dropped their leaves yet painted the horizon. Hills covered in
scrub and what looked like heather was dotted around. A small village
below, the lights of the houses just turning on as darkness fell. It
seemed perfect.

"Do you think she's coming?"

He turned to
face Muttley again. The hound looked confused for a moment, before
giving his nervous master an open mouthed smile, his tongue hanging out
like a wet sock.

"I hope she does." Whispered Dick as he huddled
into his big, blue coat in an attempt to block out the icy breeze
trying to force its way down his neck. "I really hope she does."

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PostSubject: Re: WR2K4 - 'I Hope'   Mon Nov 23, 2009 12:32 pm

Nice. I'm not usually one for fanfiction, but this was a nice read.


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