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 "How Could You Forget Bread?"

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PostSubject: "How Could You Forget Bread?"   Sat Jun 20, 2009 1:00 pm

Title: "How Could You Forget Bread?"

Series Based On: Go Go Gadgetinis

Characters Featured: Inspector Prince, Akio Ichiro Gadget, Yumi Gadget.

Theme: Family, Shopping, Love

Extra Info: Written rather quickly last week. I intended to write it for the Drabble Dabble challenge on TheO, but alas... I can't seem to get it down to 200 words. xD I'll dedicate it to the challenge owner ( ninjagirlsango ) anyway. ^^


"How Could You Forget Bread?"

“So, you didn’t get the bread then?” Prince’s eyes fell on the bag in Akio’s hand to see if she could make out the shape of a loaf of bread.

“Oh, um. I forgot.”

“How could you forget bread? It’s the one thing we use the most!”

“I’m sorry Mom, Yumi was bothering me all the way down there.”

“I was not!” Yumi dropped the bag in her hand and put her hands on her hips.

“Yes you were!” Akio glowered at his twin sister with a look of irritation. “You kept teasing me about liking Gail at school! Then you wouldn’t stop poking me in my ribs, then…” Akio’s sentence was cut off by Prince who sighed loudly.

“Yumi, must you tease your brother so much?”

“I was just getting him back for putting your bra on my head last night, Mom!”

“You did WHAT!?” Prince’s eyes widened.

“We were playing pilot upstairs while you were out with Dad. Yumi was moaning that I had Dad’s only pair of goggles, so I gave her your bra.”

Prince gave Akio the evil eye. Her mouth curved downwards into a thin, pink line as frustration hit her.

“Wait until Gadget hears about this. I swear he‘ll ground you for a month.”

“Please don’t tell Dad! We promise we’ll be good!” Akio and Yumi put on their best puppy dog look and peered up at their mother, hands clasped together.

“Yeah, like I haven’t heard THAT before.”

Rolling her eyes, Prince attempted to change the subject. She knew that if she looked at their innocent expressions any longer, she’d crack. She always did. She just couldn’t resist those adorable kids, no matter how much she tried. It was usually Gadget who did the strict parenting… She eyed their shopping bags.

“What DID you get then?”

Akio pulled out a box of chocolates, followed by Yumi who pulled out one of Prince’s favourite movies of DVD.

“Oh, great,” thought Prince, “Now I feel REALLY bad.”
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PostSubject: Re: "How Could You Forget Bread?"   Sat Jun 20, 2009 4:15 pm

Awwww. I like this. I like how you used Prince and Gadget. After seeing your art of them, I was given a vivid image. It's a cute story. Sounds just like a parent. lol. My mommy used to be like that. She would get mad at us, and we would do something sweet and she would forgive us. lol. I really like your writing, though. It's really good. ^_^

Always acknowledge a fault. This will throw those in authority off their guard and give you an opportunity to commit more. ---Mark Twain
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PostSubject: Re: "How Could You Forget Bread?"   Mon Jun 22, 2009 9:54 am

It's good to see more GGGs stuff Axel. You did this so well. I adore the twins and you got Prince spon on as usual.
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